You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter - explain why you would lile the job -give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ -say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia.

Dear Sir, I am Narinderpal Kaur. I am writing

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letter with regards to a commercial which you posted in an Australian magazine about your child's care. I was looking for

this

job

a

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long time. I

also

did

astudy

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a study

in children psychology which makes me a suitable person for it.

Besides

this

, I have

a

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six

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six-year

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year

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experience

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of experience

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in

this

field. At my workplace, I always got appreciation from my employers. I like to spend time with kids and treat them as my infants which make my service easy and enjoyable. I assure you that I will never give you a chance for any complaint from me. In my leisure time, I like to visit the parks and famous places

such

as beaches and museums in

this

country.

Moreover

, I am a person who

like

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shopping.

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, in my

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I go to malls to buy something. I hope you will hire me for your offspring. I will wait for your reply. Yours sincerely, Narinderpal Kaur