The two line graphs compare the percentage of houses which owned electrical appliances and how much time of housework which was costed in households in a specific country from 1920 to 2019.

The two line graphs compare the percentage of houses which owned electrical appliances and how much time of housework which was costed in households in a specific country from 1920 to 2019.
These two line graphs compare the percentage of
households
in a given country that own appliances and the cost of time spent on household chores from 1920 to 2019.
It is clear that
over a period of almost a century, people spent less time per
week
on household chores with the help of three appliances: washing machines, refrigerators and hoovers.
Accordingly
, the holding rate of the above-mentioned appliances showed an
overall
increase over the same period. Starting with the 50 hours a
week
spent on housework in 1920, only 30% of
households
owned a hoover, the rate of holding
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washing machines was only 40% and almost no
households
used hoovers to clean their houses. The
next
century saw a gradual reduction in the number of hours spent on housework per
week
, reaching a low of almost 10 hours per
week
by 2019. From almost zero in 1920, more and more
households
bought Hoover, which led to a rapid increase in hoover ownership, reaching a peak of 100% in 1980. The same trend is shown in the proportion of
households
owning a washing machine, the latter reaching 100% in 2000, a decade after washing machines. ownership of refrigerators rose sharply between 1920 and 1960,
then
fluctuated over the
next
59 years, reaching around 75% in 2019.
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