You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter. • Describe the item • Explain where and when you left it • Say what action you would like the company to take

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to inquire about a

neckless

which I have lost on a train. The

neckless

is 22k gold chain with a heart-shaped pendant and about 22cm long and

thus

quite distinguishable.

In addition

, the

neckless

is a diamond-cut style, as well as there, are letters engraved near the chain lock namely, MK. I was travelling from Colombo to Kandy on 12th December evening train, scheduled at 4.30pm. I think it was lost during the journey as I was inside the cabin the whole trip and the cabin number was D2. I was seated near the window on the 3rd row and only noticed that I have misplaced it once I got off the train. Kindly, let me know if you have received any information regarding the

neckless

to my contact number, +94777553636.

Further

, I would highly appreciate

Correct pronoun usage

it if

show examples

you could put a notice on the railway station so, that anyone who confronts the item can reach me. Hope to hear from you soon. Best regards,

Malsha

Correct your spelling

Marsha

Masha

Munasinghe

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You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter. • Describe the item • Explain where and when you left it • Say what action you would like the company to take

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