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Some people feel that governments should take a large proportion of people' salaries to pay for public services such as roads and schools. Other thinks high taxes are bad. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some
people
 believe that it is necessary for the
government
 to take a large amount of taxes
of
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people
's salaries for constructing roads and
provide
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services
.
This
essays
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 will discuss both views but believes that high taxes are bad. On the one hand, there are two key reasons why the
government
 should impose
higher
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 salary tax. The main reason is that it can provide citizens with better
services
 and infrastructures. When the
government
 receives more
money
 from the
people
, they can use them in different areas
such
 as building a better public transport network and more public facilities like sports
centre
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. Another reason is that it is beneficial to the underprivileged. The
government
 can provide some public
services
 or subsidies to society with the
money
 they received.
For example
, the poor can visit the public hospital for free when they are sick.
Therefore
, it can reduce their
economy
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 pressures.
On the other hand
, there are two reasons why the
government
 should not impose high taxes.
Firstly
, it may reduce the motivation for
people
 to earn
money
. When
people
 have to pay a large proportion of their salaries to the
government
, some of them will think that getting subsidies may provide them
a
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higher income than having a job.
As a result
, they will not be motivated to work.
Moreover
, it may increase the pressure for some
people
 with low
salary
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salaries
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. Some citizens’ salaries only merely cover their expenditures, if they have to pay a large part of their income to the
government
, they may not have enough
money
 for living. So it may affect their quality of living. To conclude,
although
 high tax may provide better
services
 to
people
,
this
 essay still believes that its drawbacks outweigh its benefits.
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