You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter. • Describe the item • Explain where and when you left it • Say what action you would like the company to take

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Dear sir, I am Rohit Sharma. I am writing

this

with regards to my wallet which I lost on a train. Actually, a day before I travelled to Vancouver from Surrey and I took

waterfront's

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the waterfront's

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expo line in which I left my purse. It is passport-sized , in black colour which contains my all bank cards and

also

my identification card with my photo.Actually, I got out it from my pocket when I put my compass cart in it after that I did not remember where I kept it. I sit at the

last

near the window. I thought I left it there. I have a humble request to you please if you get any information about my wallet please inform me because my important things are in it. I need all of these urgently.

Also

, if possible

then

please see the expo line maybe you can find it. I hope you consider it and respond to me as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Rohit Sharma

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

166 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter. • Describe the item • Explain where and when you left it • Say what action you would like the company to take

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Many young people regularly change their jobs over the years. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

nowadays the increasing of garbage (waste) is a real concern. why is this happening? What can be done to solve this problem?

some people say that history is one of the most important school subjects. other people say that, in todays world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. give your own opinion regarding this issue.