many parents complain about violence promoted to their children through video games, tv programs and other media. Why is it happening? What can be the solution for it?
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last
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games
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, some parents Add a missing verb
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This
essay discusses what are the reasons of
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for
this
trend and there are some possible solutions too for the following reasons.
One of the major reasons is that most of the entertainment companies are focused Change preposition
on youngsters's
youngsters's
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youngsters'
attaraction
about theirs' Correct your spelling
attraction
product
like Fix the agreement mistake
products
video
games
, hence
, they have added more violences
and using different types Change the wording
violence
acts of violence
outbreaks of violence
guns
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of guns
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a free
video
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this
. For example
, a recent report by the Times of India said that more than 75% of the indians
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who
children play Change the pronoun
whom
video
games
like Pupg and free fire, thus
, recently has opened in a separate mental hospital for Pupg players. Another major reason is that this
can create more activeness and competitation
among the young people.
There are two main Correct your spelling
competition
sollutions
to solve Correct your spelling
solutions
this
issue. One of the possible solutions is that parents should monitor to theirs' little one
how long use and what use in order to kids playing time can be reduced. Another possible solution is that parents can do parental control in Correct pronoun usage
ones
playstore
settings while kids cannot download any roughness Correct your spelling
play store
games
and programs, as a result
, they can see only theirs' age-based shows and games
. For example
, in North korea
, youngsters cannot watch any Change the capitalization
Korea
violence
program; Netflix has released a Replace the word
violent
voience
series which is Correct your spelling
voice
Squad
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a Squad
this
show is world famous
except North Add a hyphen
world-famous
korea
.
To conclude, children Change the capitalization
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affectes
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affected
affects
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by
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shows and playing Replace the word
brutal
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violent
video
games
. Fathers and mothers should be controlled and supervised to
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by
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. I hope these kinds of roughness programs should be restricted.Fix the agreement mistake
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