many parents complain about violence promoted to their children through video games, tv programs and other media. Why is it happening? What can be the solution for it?

Over the
last
two or three decades, children have been focusing on entertainment activities like
video
games
, tv programs and etc.
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, some parents
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about these kinds of activities because
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can
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more
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to their's
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.
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essay discusses what are the reasons
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trend and there are some possible solutions too for the following reasons. One of the major reasons is that most of the entertainment companies are focused
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attraction
about theirs'
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like
video
games
,
hence
, they have added more
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and using different types
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like
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fire
video
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among the world in order to the companies earn huge amount of profit from
this
.
For example
, a recent report by the Times of India said that more than 75% of the
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children play
video
games
like Pupg and free fire,
thus
, recently has opened in a separate mental hospital for Pupg players. Another major reason is that
this
can create more activeness and
competitation
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competition
among the young people. There are two main
sollutions
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solutions
to solve
this
issue. One of the possible solutions is that parents should monitor to theirs' little
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how long use and what use in order to kids playing time can be reduced. Another possible solution is that parents can do parental control in
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settings while kids cannot download any roughness
games
and programs,
as a result
, they can see only theirs' age-based shows and
games
.
For example
, in North
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, youngsters cannot watch any
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program; Netflix has released a
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voice
series which is
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game show,
this
show is
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except North
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. To conclude, children
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affected
affects
negatively
through
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watching
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shows and playing
voilent
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violent
video
games
. Fathers and mothers should be controlled and supervised
to
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theirs's
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. I hope these kinds of roughness programs should be restricted.
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