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The charts show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
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The given pie charts illustrate the percentage of
water
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 used in six different parts for different purposes including domestic,
agriculture
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agricultural
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 and industrial
use
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.
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, a glance at the charts reveals that different variations are evident in different regions.It is obvious that Europe and North America
use
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 the most
water
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 for industrial purposes. It can be clearly seen that the most
water
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 consumption for industrial
use
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 is in Europe and North America, respectively, 53 and 48 per
cent
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. In comparison, the majority of
water
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 is used in the agriculture section in South America (71 per
cent
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). In Africa, Central
Asia
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, and South East
Asia
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 the most usage of
water
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 is for farming purposes between 81 to 88 per
cent
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.
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, the domestic sector compromised the minimum percentage in these countries between 7 to 9 per
cent
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.
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 Central
Asia
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 used just 5 per
cent
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 of its
water
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 for the aim of industrial
use
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,
this
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 amount in south-east
Asia
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 is more than double(12 per
cent
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).

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use, cent, asia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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