Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interest, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
It is an often argued issue whether employers should ask
applicants
' personal infomation
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is an irrelavant
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irrelevant
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essay discusses both viewpoints, I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.
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job
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who ask
similarly
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skills, experience and other extra technical abilities Correct your spelling
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otherwise
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, if a person applys
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an
job
, it needs for
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MBA qualification, management skill as well as any previous experience; Correct article usage
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otherwise
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, managers should be known about
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applicants
' personal inforamation
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backgrounds
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For example
, if a man applys
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applies
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for a
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, employers should be known about his personal data
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candidate
,
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apply
importance
because she might be gone anywhere after marriage.
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candidate
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