Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interest, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

It is an often argued issue whether employers should ask

applicants

' personal

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information

or

this

is an

irrelavant

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irrelevant

. Some think that

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detail might be necessary and useful while others say that

this

is an

irrelavant

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irrelevant

data

which is

applicants

' details.

However

,

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essay discusses both viewpoints, I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons. On the one hand,

applicants

' information is an

irrelavant

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irrelevant

for

applyinng

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applying

job

and there are numerous employers

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often

similarly

. A persons'

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curriculum

skills, experience and other extra technical abilities

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the

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main importance and require

otherwise

personal

data

is unwanted for managers.

For example

, if a person

applys

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applies

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in

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HR

job

, it needs

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the

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MBA qualification, management skill as well as any previous experience;

otherwise

is he single or married and hobbies is indeed unwanted.

On the other hand

, managers should be known

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applicants

' personal

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information

because

this

can lead to understanding interviewers'

background

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;

as a result

, managers can analyse interviewers

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any criminal background and had any case in order to they can appoint

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honest man rather than criminal.

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, if a man

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applies

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bank

job

, employers should be known about his personal

data

because

this

job

is money handle employment.

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, appointing a woman

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candidate

in any work

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is she single or married is the most

importance

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because she might be gone anywhere after marriage. To conclude,

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candidate

personal

informations

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information

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is

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unwanted in some

situation

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situations

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; money handling and

higher

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level of position in employment should be known about the

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candidate's

personal

data

. In my opinion, about

this

,

applicants

' personal details might be

relavant

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relevant

and very useful.