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In many places, large chain stores are taking over the marketplace, making it impossible for small businesses to compete with them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this situation? Support your opinion with reasons and examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Established
stores
 are owning a prevalent
spot
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sport
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 in the marketing place, making smaller
businesses
 not conducive enough to put their brands on the big map of campaigns.
This
 essay is to discuss the benefits and drawbacks of
this
 status quo. Apparently, large chain
stores
 earn for themself the catbird seat from long-standing prestige.
Such
 kudos could only become grandiose and trustworthy when harnessing time and quality to drum up support from a capacious range of
customers
.
Trade-off
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then
 could occur simultaneously since companies are able to profit from an immense amount of finance so that they could convert it into anticipatedly qualitative products , entrancing
customers
 in need.
On the other hand
,
this
 propensity critically tampers with younger, smaller
businesses
, since it would begrudgingly
phase out
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customers
 with the superior limelight of large chain
stores
.
Majority
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 of
customers
 don’t simply have time to test out younger,smaller
businesses
 and filter out their convoluted selections.
Therefore
, they would rather be
grativated
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gravitated
 to chalantly putative and long-lived
businesses
.
This
 ends up as dictatorship and superiority in
an
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intense marketing industry. Those who work as hard, exuberantly trying to display their innovative brainchild are overpowered as aforementioned. Eventually, after days
extirpating
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 bankable income,
such
businesses
 could be led to the stage of bankruptcy, leaving a deal of hope, money and a not so assertively adequate marketing system. In a nutshell,
such
 prevalence is advantageous to large chain
stores
, remaining hordes of handicaps for those who
initially
 set up.
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