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Some employees are giving increased importance to employing people with good social skills in addition to good qualification. Do you agree or dis-agree that social skills are as importat as good qualification for success in a job?

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In companies, owners are showing more focus on social
skills
 along with
the
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qualification
 while hiring the
employes
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. I completely agree with the statement that communication
skills
 are a
a
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must for an employee in order to reach
to
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a
a
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good position in the company. In
this
 modern era, communication
skills
 play the main role in the field of business (or) jobs. when you are going for a job interview an interviewer
first
 looks for
skills
 after that will see the education
qualification
.
Firstly
, if you are working in a company as an employee you must possess social
skills
 it is
a
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 essential requirement. Because in office we need to deal with many people in different kinds of work. So in
this
 ,regard good
skills
 will help.
In addition
 to
this
, in business ,
meeting
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meetings
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 we have to give
the
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 presentation and people may arise
the
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question based on our presentation. We have to cooperate with them in a proper way. If we had good communication
skills
 can easily come out of
this
 situation. Apart from
this
, in
marketing
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 field
skills
 plays an important role. We have to influence the customer to buy the product. By telling them the benefits and by creating the emergency to buy the product
skills
 are required. If a person had
skills
 along with
the
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educational
qualification
 can reach
to
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the
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great success in their life. For ,example if a person had good
skills
 but the one is not good in education can still have a better future. To be concluded, employees are focusing more on social
skills
 along with
the
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educational
qualification
. So it is necessary to acquire more
skills
 to each a good position in the job.
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