You bought a piece of furniture from a store in another town recently. There is a problem with the item you purchased. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter explain the details of your purchase describe the problem that you have with it suggest what can be done about it
Dear Sir or Madam,
This
is John Smith writing, to draw your attention to a damaged cupboard that I recently purchased. To begin
with, the purchase was made in the store in Colombo, which is far from the
the place I reside. Further
, it was done on 20 December 2021, and the receipt number is, N125654. I have attached a copy for your reference.
Although
, I made sure to check for any flaws at the time of buying, unfortunately, I have forgotten to see the drawers inside. However
, when I came home, I saw that it is craked inside and not in a condition to be used. Further
, the locks are also
not functioning properly.
Therefore
, I request you, to replace the cupboard with a new one. Moreover
, failing which, I would like to request a refund of the full amount. Please call me on the number provided at the time time of purchase, if further
information is required.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
John SmithSubmitted by swadhi.sivakumar on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite