Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Acceptance of difficult situations
such
as financial Linking Words
hardships
and emotional distresses is considered by some Use synonyms
people
the best way of coping, whereas others claim that it is more beneficial for Use synonyms
people
to attempt to improve the issues they are facing. Personally, I agree with the latter perspective. Both sides of the argument and the reasoning for my opinion will be discussed in the essay.
Accepting that Use synonyms
one
's cannot Use synonyms
change
their surroundings in cases of Use synonyms
hardships
is believed to be a realistic approach to Use synonyms
life
by some Use synonyms
people
. As Use synonyms
society
is a machine, with millions of gears turning coherently, any individual facing difficulties is said to disrupt the whole process; Use synonyms
therefore
, they should try to Linking Words
change
their Use synonyms
life
. Use synonyms
However
, it should not be forgotten that within millions of small gears, losing a few would not affect the overall efficiency of Linking Words
society
. Use synonyms
For
Linking Words
example
, an individual facing poverty in exchange for more wealth Use synonyms
to
other citizens is beneficial to the population. In America, the majority of wealth is in the hand of only the top 5% of the population. Change preposition
for
This
has rendered any attempts to improve personal circumstances obsolete and meaningless. Linking Words
Moreover
, when facing challenges and Linking Words
hardships
in Use synonyms
life
, Use synonyms
people
can only rely on a rare success in career or personal matters. Use synonyms
For
Linking Words
example
, selling items online is Use synonyms
one
of the most effective Use synonyms
way
to eradicate Change to a plural noun
ways
monetary
problem, but it is Add an article
the monetary
also
the most volatile business that commonly Linking Words
result
in more Change the verb form
results
lose
than gain. Another Replace the word
loss
example
is a failing relationship, where Use synonyms
further
attempts to improve could be seen as a Linking Words
mean
to protect personal pride rather than actual attempts.
Even though Fix the agreement mistake
means
society
, on the whole, do not care about a small number of Use synonyms
people
with issues, they themselves can do various things to improve their circumstances. I believe that every individual possesses the ability to solve bad situations, Use synonyms
to
adapt and overcome Fix the infinitive
apply
hardships
, and Use synonyms
to
improve oneself to a higher level. Fix the infinitive
apply
Firstly
, necessity is the mother of invention. Any issues in Linking Words
life
can be seen as an opportunity for personal development, and any problems in Use synonyms
life
can be a way to measure personal worth in Use synonyms
society
. Use synonyms
For
Linking Words
example
, a small budget for groceries and daily items can aid in creating a reasonable, logical spending habit. Use synonyms
Moreover
, becoming better at a hobby or a profession can lead to a tremendous boost in self-confidence and living standards. Knowing that Linking Words
one
Use synonyms
possess
an achievement can create a sense of self-confidence and personal trust. And Change the verb form
possesses
such
Linking Words
attitude
will benefit Correct article usage
an attitude
one
's Use synonyms
life
as their perspectives and actions will Use synonyms
change
Use synonyms
accordingly
.
In conclusion, while it is true that Linking Words
society
will not Use synonyms
change
itself to improve the Use synonyms
hardships
of a person, he himself owns the strength to make changes and to improve himself for the purpose of changing his Use synonyms
life
. I strongly believe that regardless of difficulties or challenges in Use synonyms
life
, there are always opportunities for self-improvement.Use synonyms
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Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.