Graduates who cannot find work in their chosen field should be advised to do a second degree, rather than taking a job that does not interest them. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

The vast majority of

students

often

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issues, when they embark to seek a job, which is coherent with their core qualification. Ultimately, some percentage of graduates give up

to find

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desirable

workplace

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and

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by companies that are not preferred by them. Some people deem that

such

tendency should incur changes. At the same time,

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argue that governments should concern about

this

trouble. I advocate strongly with both statements and going

to ward

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the main reasons of

this

common issue, provide possible ramifications of its and give some proposals to resolve

this

issue. On the one hand,

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large number of

students

start

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career

during

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the

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receiving of

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degree

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.

Thus

, they undergo difficulties with studies

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they spend a lot of their free time on

job

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, which

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them an additional income. Even so, it would be unfair not to mention the fact that the basic reason of working

students

consists in the incorrect policy of many

universities

.

For instance

, some colleges don’t provide decent scholarships for

students

, overload them

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multiple projects and don’t inspire the youth to be high-educated in their

qualification

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. Eventually, when

students

obtain their

diploma

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, they often feel unnecessary and some of

such

graduates force to continue their education in another area.

On the other hand

, a lot of

students

claim that they enrol in the

universities

only for one reason: to be high-educated. Regardless of

this

fact that

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stuff

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of

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the

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some

universities

supports

this

idea and enables

such

students

to be

more busy

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in

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.

Furthermore

,

students

may not

to

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appear in these

universities

buildings. Fortunately,

such

educational organisations are slightly few and professors and tutors are interested to nurture the generation, which will be literacy and high-educated. In

conclusion

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I would stress, as I have mentioned that government should concentrate on

this

issue with

students

. In my opinion, the person should not spend his young life to find himself.

Nevertheless

,

students

must decide upon for themselves what occupation they prefer more.