Some countries spend lots of money to make bicycle usage easier. Why is this? Is this the best solution to traffic congestion.

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population have been increasing tremendously than ever before,

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users.

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eco-friendly and

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cost is very low; is

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idea can reduce the

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usage.

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and foremost,

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can reduce

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air pollution undoubtedly.

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can only operate

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manual,

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a lot of dollars to make a new lane only for the

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riders,

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, they can ride most conveniently without facing any troubles.

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the Tamil

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state of India has

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for

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riders.

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can reduce

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because four

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can travel at a time of a car takes space.

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to reduce

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congestion

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underground

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for reducing

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, they should be improved to theirs' public transport quality in order to the population can travel

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vehicle

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traffic

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can be

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diminished

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, in Australia has developed to theirs' public transport,

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, countless people use those transport,

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, the

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rate is very low

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compared any other continent. To conclude,

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bicycle

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a bicycle

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ride is given more benefits to the public who are used

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as maintaining a low

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cost

and reducing air pollution.

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remedy cannot cure the

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crowed on

road

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. I think there are some alternative ideas can only cure

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problem like underground

road

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inrease

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increase

and improve the number and quality respectively.

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Some countries spend lots of money to make bicycle usage easier. Why is this? Is this the best solution to traffic congestion.

Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Some people believe that animal should be allowed to be eaten and experimented on while other think they have equal right as human being, discuss both views and your opinion.

Every years several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if they are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The illustrations show how chocolate is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.