You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organiser of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organiser of the meeting and include Details about the meeting The problem you face What should be done

Dear sir/ madam, I am writing
letter to inform you that I faced lots of problems with the hotel that you booked for me to attend a meeting.
, I am David, I came to your city for meeting purposes.
week, the meeting was held to expand our business in other countries. All delicates were very polite and gentle . I like the idea of detailed everything from seating arrangements to presenting the presentation.
, I appreciate all efforts which you have done to make my stay comfortable but, unfortunately, my stay was not gone well because of their services. The lighting of the room was not proper and the ventilation system was
not working properly. I would love
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you go personally for checking all the arrangements of the hotel before booking. At
, I am grateful
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treatment which you want to give me from your end but, for
time you should do more attention
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all arrangements. I hope you will reply on
issue soon Your faithful, David Johnson
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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