Completing a university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people thinking that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, people’s Occupations are the most critical characteristic which determines income, facilities, and respect. Some believe that holding academic certifications could be the only way to achieve a decent job;

however

, the issue is not straightforward. Other groups surmise that developing soft skills plays a crucial role in getting good

jobs

.

First

of all, it must be said that universities are the places that young people attend after obtaining basic knowledge in high school to develop the level of different scientific subjects. Designers of the curriculums of different academic disciplines choose modern syllabus according to the occupations’ market in various kinds of professional activities to assist students in finding high-ranking

jobs

.

In addition

,

further

education provides professional employees could marshal facts more properly and

also

they would be brighter in data-gathering. The mentioned traits could be beneficial for companies and

as a result

, job seekers who have those properties would achieve well-paid

jobs

.

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youth who have completed university education are smarter or it can be said they have faster minds and as a

consequence

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they usually get better

jobs

. In

different

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way of thinking it is thought that economic institutions in order to raise their productivity and make their output better are always seeking

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more experienced people, most administrators of these companies believe, they should somehow motivate experienced experts to work in their offices,

in other words

, job seekers who are more experienced are most likely to have good

jobs

. Another argument is employees who have developed soft skills could help other workers to communicate with their clients better. It is clear most employers like to hire that kind of

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more than others. In

summary

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it has been shown that most of the time good

jobs

are waiting for people who have more

experiences

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experience

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in their

jobs

and they have

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the better

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condition and even more options to choose appropriate

jobs

.