You organised a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative. Many elderly guests attended this party which of grand success. Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter, Give details of party the reasons why party was successful Mention a staff member who helped you a lot

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Dear Sir, I am Ankit Prajapati, writing

this

letter to thank you and

also

to express my positive reviews about the services offered by your team for my grandfather's 90th birthday celebration which was on 1st January 2022. For

this

, I have invited plenty of guests and some of them were aged one. The Banquet Hall which you have provided have all the required facilities which one needed

such

event. The stage was decorated very nicely, there are plenty of chairs with tables and

also

the lighting was nice too.

Also

,of course, the food was really nice that anyone can eat it, I can say the food which all can eat without any hesitation.

Although

I had included some activities to add more colour to the celebration like puzzles, magic shows and musical chairs, your team had added more grace to make those activities more enjoyable for all.

Additionally

, all staff members have a very supportive and helping nature for

such

party, but most importantly Amrita Shah, who had helped my grandpa at every stage of the party like he was her grandfather.

Therefore

my grandpa has sent his blessing especially for her and

also

to your whole staff . Please pass my best thanks to each and every team member. In the end, looking forward to organising

such

other events with you. Yours faithfully, Ankit Prajapati

Submitted by ankitengg1989 on Tue Jan 11 2022

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

228 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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