You organised a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative. Many elderly guests attended this party which of grand success. Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter, Give details of party the reasons why party was successful Mention a staff member who helped you a lot

Dear Sir, I am Ankit Prajapati, writing
this
letter to thank you and
also
to express my positive reviews about the services offered by your team for my grandfather's 90th birthday celebration which was on 1st January 2022. For
this
, I have invited plenty of guests and some of them were aged one. The Banquet Hall which you have provided have all the required facilities which one needed
such
event. The stage was decorated very nicely, there are plenty of chairs with tables and
also
the lighting was nice too.
Also
,of course, the food was really nice that anyone can eat it, I can say the food which all can eat without any hesitation.
Although
I had included some activities to add more colour to the celebration like puzzles, magic shows and musical chairs, your team had added more grace to make those activities more enjoyable for all.
Additionally
, all staff members have a very supportive and helping nature for
such
party, but most importantly Amrita Shah, who had helped my grandpa at every stage of the party like he was her grandfather.
Therefore
my grandpa has sent his blessing especially for her and
also
to your whole staff . Please pass my best thanks to each and every team member. In the end, looking forward to organising
such
other events with you. Yours faithfully, Ankit Prajapati
Submitted by ankitengg1989 on

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