You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter, - Give details of your visit to the restaurant - Explain the reason for the celebration - Say what was good about the food and the service

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to give
me
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appreciation to your restaurant and the staff for their hospitability. Recently, on the 23rd of
this
month, we visited your restaurant late
night
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at night

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to
fulfill
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our cravings
with
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for

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the exotic gourmet food that you serve. Indeed, because the reviews of your restaurant are excellent, we were excited to taste the
flavors
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flavours

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of the dishes, but the primary reason
of
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for

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our visit was my cousin’s 18th birthday
,
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since we had heard that you organize birthday parties quite well.
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, for surprising her, we decided to try out your fairytale theme with the barbeque as well as continental offer. Undoubtedly, the decorum was professionally organized very well and the catering arrangements made were top-notch.
Moreover
, it was the friendly nature of the staff that made the event more joyful.
In addition
to
this
, there were many food options available for the barbeque and the idea of making it on the table in front of us was rather unique. Please convey my thanks to your staff and owner. Yours faithfully, Tahura Saiyed
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