You will be celebrating your son’s 8th birthday next week. You want to invite one of your colleagues to attend the birthday party. Write an invitation letter to this college. In your letter, invite your colleague to your son’s birthday party give details of the party and its date and time say how happy you and your family would be to have him/her at the party

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Mike, My son Amos is turning 8

this

upcoming week and I write

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letter to invite you to embrace the occasion with your presence. My son would be delighted to see your daughter on his birthday evening as both of them study together. The party is scheduled for Friday, 19th February 2022 at my house from 6.00pm onwards. There is a carpark available in my backyard. Most of my family and friends will be present for the celebration along with Amos's friends from school. We have organized various entertainments

such

as face painting , musical chairs and other exciting games following a dinner buffet. We are planning to conclude the part by 9.00pm so the children may return to school tomorrow without feeling uncomfortable. It is been a long time since both of our families met each other .

Therefore

, I and my wife would be feeling happy to receive you, your wife Kate and child Jancy. We can recall some funny memories of our work-life and enjoy ourselves together. I am eagerly looking forward to your response Yours Faithfully,

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

183 words

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heartfelt invitation
celebrate
occasion
significance
venue
entertainment
appreciate
memorable
RSVP
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looking forward
warm closing

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