MANY HIGH-LEVEL POSITIONS IN COMPANIES ARE FILLED BY MEN EVEN THOUGH THE WORKFORCE IN MANY DEVELOPED COUNTRIES IS MORE THAN 50 PERCENT FEMALE. COMPANIES SHOULD BE REQUIRED TO ALLOCATE A CERTAIN PERCENTAGE OF THESE POSITIONS TO WOMEN. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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last

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women

have been

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occupying

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in numerous

first

-tier nations, even though, countless organisation's have only

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for their

superier

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superior

positions,

therefore

, some folks think that

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should be filled by

women

. I

strogly

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strongly

agree with

this

statement and

this

essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. To commence with,

women

should be appointed in

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in a plethora of enterprises because

women

have many more talents and skills rather than males, even though, huge industry's higher

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filled by men.

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multitude

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and leadership quality,

therefore

, they can be managed and controlled better than

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gender in higher positions.

For example

, a recent report by the Times of India said that more than 70% of the

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enterprises has appointed only men

instead

of

women

.

Furthermore

, some

companie's

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companies

employer

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employers

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do not like to appoint

women

for management

position

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positions

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such

as CEO because they think that

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women

women's

womens

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women

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have numerous

responsiblities

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responsibilities

rather than men which is family.

In addition

,

women

to go another place when they get married in another place groom;

this

is the one reason for employers do not like to

filling

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in superior position who

women

.

For instance

, in Indian's

women

often change and quit their occupation when they

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married

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and blessed

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. To conclude,

women

should be filled to the higher post in huge organisations for

women

have more patience, leadership qualities, controlling and maintaining talents.

Therefore

, I strongly agree with

this

statement in the above-mentioned details. I hope

this

process is conducive to

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pointing

numerous

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women

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womens

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in

superior

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position

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in huge companies.