A government’s role is only to provide defense capability and urban infrastructure (roads, water supplies, etc.). All other services (education, health, social security) should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some would argue that the governors should only try to provide vital requirements
such
as security, roads, water supplies, and so on, essential for
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function of a society and most
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responsibilities should be given to nongovernmental groups. Others believe that the
government
is responsible for all
activities
. In my opinion, it is better to give most
activities
to members of a community and only structural needs must be provided by
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. On the one hand,
although
, if the
government
is responsible for anything in a population, it may cause everything according to the laws and there are
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disturbances in social
activities
, because of
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quality of
activities
and less usage of individuals’ ideas, there is minor or no improvement in works.
Accordingly
, people who believed that they work for their
government
, are not very motivated to improve in their job. It is evidenced that
for example
, workers are not very productive when they feel that their attitudes have small or no effect on their work.
On the other hand
, in a society the main advantage of giving most
activities
except that of structural ones, to private groups is improvement and reduction in costs, both are due to the competitive quality of personal organizations.
Moreover
, less consumption of energy resources and
thus
saving them for the
next
generations is the other positive point, because of trying to reduce the price of
activities
.
For instance
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manufacture tries to produce, more qualified and cheaper products than others, in order to sell more, which results in constant improvement in manufacturing.
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in my belief, it is better for
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society as a whole that private services are responsible for most
activities
, and
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pivotal goods and exact supervision. In conclusion, despite the attitude that
government
should provide all job opportunities for people, in my belief, governors just should provide some main things needed for their country and private groups should be responsible for most
activities
in a healthy competition under comprehensive supervision of
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