some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology

Considering both two ideas which are the general thoughts of

society

, I agree with the

first

idea which is

university

students

should have

privilege

Change the article

the privilege

show examples

to study whatever they like.

University

students

are

one

of

group

Add an article

the group

a group

show examples

in the

society

having much vison or the idea about

the

Remove the article

apply

show examples

their future and current

on goings

Correct your spelling

ongoings

show examples

in the

society

. Before they

entered

Wrong verb form

enter

show examples

to

Change preposition

apply

show examples

the

university

as

students

, they may pass out various

type

Fix the agreement mistake

types

show examples

of examinations

such

as A/L, O/L and grade 5

examination

Fix the agreement mistake

examinations

show examples

.

Nevertheless

, before doing the A/L all of the

students

should select the stream which is according

on

Change preposition

to

show examples

their future career. In that stage most of the parents, teachers may support

for

Change preposition

apply

show examples

them.

This

decision is very important. Because

this

would be the fundamentals or the

basic

Replace the word

basis

show examples

for the

university

stream. So,

after

Change preposition

apply

show examples

students

who

is

Change the verb form

are

show examples

eligible to

entered

Change the verb

enter

show examples

to

Change preposition

apply

show examples

the

university

should have

authority

Correct article usage

the authority

show examples

to follow up

the

Remove the article

apply

show examples

any subjects which are related to their degree.

Then

only

students

spent their

university

life happily and

freedom

Replace the word

freely

show examples

. I think that

this

will not be

the

Correct article usage

a

show examples

bad effect

to

Change preposition

on

show examples

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

society

and

this

may lead the

students

to

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

innovations too. If not, they may suffer their

university

life and

mislead

Change the form of the verb

misleading

show examples

to not

he

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

covers

Wrong verb form

cover

show examples

up the degree within

given

Add an article

a given

the given

show examples

period. So that will be the bad or the negative effect to the

society

. For

this

one

I remembered

one

of my

university

friend

Change to a plural noun

friends

show examples

, she is Maheshi,

came

Correct pronoun usage

who came

show examples

from

small

Add an article

a small

show examples

village with

poor

Correct article usage

a poor

show examples

background family. But because of her encourage she entered

to

Change preposition

apply

show examples

the

university

luckily. Her future plan is to be a Researcher

of

Change preposition

in

show examples

farming. Unfortunately, according to the

university

permissions

Add a comma

,permissions

show examples

she was unable to do the fundamental subject which is related to that career. So Maheshi

stressed

Add a missing verb

was stressed

show examples

and ailed to get high marks for other subjects too. That was

worstly

Correct your spelling

worst

effect

to

Change preposition

on

show examples

her life and after 3 years only she success with her degree.

Currently

Add a comma

,Currently

show examples

she working as a teacher at

one

of the small

school

Fix the agreement mistake

schools

show examples

in her small village. Because of

university

restriction

Fix the agreement mistake

restrictions

show examples

, we are missing

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

valuable resource

to

Change preposition

for

show examples

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

society

and

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

nature. In conclusion, If people

doing

Wrong verb form

do

show examples

the thing they wish, it may lead

innovations

Change preposition

to innovations

show examples

and new concepts. Because they interest the thing which people

are wish

Change the verb form

wish

show examples

to do. It may affect the new innovations and new concepts.