the diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia present and future.

The diagrams illustrate the

process

of

water

supply in Australia at present and future.

Overall

, it can be seen that the

process

in the future does not link with the river. It is

also

a relative

process

with the 3 stages. Nowadays, the

process

of the

water

supply system is starting at a dam or storage, where

water

is divided into two parts by a machine, these two

water

are called wastewater and pure

water

. In the following stage, pure

water

is supplied to any households, factories, shops and city for use in various activities,

while

the other

water

is sent to the

water

treatment plant. After the pure

water

which is used by households and different places will send the wastewater back to the

water

treatment plant,

Moreover

, the system will send the stormwater to the river. In the future day, waste and stormwater which are delivered from households and various places will treat in the

water

treatment plant by a machine. ,

consequently

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the machine

causing

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the dirty

water

change

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to

the

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pure

water

,

that

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people can use apply again.