You are going to spend your vacation in Rome, Italy. Your friend's grandfather lives there and has offered to let you stay in his apartment. Write a letter to your friend's grandfather. In your letter: -Thank him for the offer but politely decline - Inform him of when you will be in Rome and your travel plans - Invite him for an outing

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Dear Enzo, I hope you and your family are safe and sound. I’ve heard a lot of great things about you from your

grand-son

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, Martin. After your invitation, it appears to me that you’re really a kind and generous man, and

I’m

grateful for your invitation.

However

, I’ve arranged to stay with my intimate friend called Ali during my trip and I have to refuse your kind invitation.

This

doesn’t mean that

I’m

not going to meet you

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this

trip, and we’ll make a plan to visit each other. Talking about my plans, I’ll get.there on the 24th of June, and I stay there till the 27th of July. Since it’s scorching hot there that time of year, I really prefer to visit indoor sites like historic churches and museums.

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I’m

really into Italian

cousin

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I’m

a pizza fan actually.

This

makes me make a plan to try dining in traditional pizzerias of Rome. I hope you help me choose the best restaurants there. It would be great if our visit takes place in one of them. I would appreciate it if you

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be ok to hang out on

25th

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afternoon. I hope to hear from you soon Give my regards to Martin Best wishes, Sina

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

209 words

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Structure your letter

Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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