Nowadays, many people change jobs quite regularly, rather than working in the one company for their entire careers. Why do you think this is happening? How can companies keep their workers?

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trend shows that
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don't want to spend
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life in one job.
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with that statement because
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want to be more experienced in
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I think that it's caused by the
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changes. Nowadays, many
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tend to change their
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regularly
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is because they want to experience different aspects of engaging in
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companies. It may be caused because of
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standard of modern
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which is considered to be multi-functional and experienced in many job sectors.
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, my friend Adam is an IT programmer but his duties are not only focused
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computer
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section.
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, he has to be skilled and have
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he has to be a good team leader which requires skills in leadership. Presently, most of the
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tend to change their
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from
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generation
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opportunities
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transport wasn't developed as it is currently.
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jobs
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throughout
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the internet.
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that younger
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seems to be more flexible and pointed into
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the diversity
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of career.
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, my friend Artur
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has been working in many sectors like construction or
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finance
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college
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in different sectors. In my
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to keep
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the employee
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in the
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it's crucial to ensure
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growth and satisfaction and funds to live proudly.
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, it would be a big
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challenge
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to keep him inside the business. In Conclusion,
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to change their career more frequently to be more experienced. I strongly believe in that statement and I think it is
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related to the
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changes. In my view, these futuristic transformations will be beneficial in
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the development
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of ourselves.
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