The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?
According to some
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research
researches
the popularity of online shopping is increasing nowadays. In my perspective, Add a comma
,researches
this
tendency can have an influence on reducing the amount
of traditional shops. Change the quantifier
number
However
, shops in cities and town
cannot be closed at all, and traditional Fix the agreement mistake
towns
shoping
format will be saved.
Should be pointed out that online Correct your spelling
shopping
shoping
is very a convenient and Correct your spelling
shopping
timesaving
process. Customers have an opportunity to select items in Correct your spelling
time-saving
comfortable
atmosphere. They do not have needs to go out for Add an article
a comfortable
shoping
. Correct your spelling
shopping
Moreover
, individuals can compare the prices for items between different shops and choose cheapest
one. They can research items' characteristics more carefully and read testimonials before doing purchasing, which can help to avoid Correct article usage
the cheapest
from
unneeded purchases. Change preposition
apply
Therefore
, buying procces
can become more productive and parsimonious in general. Correct your spelling
process
For instance
, the success of amazon clearly shows the popularity of online stores among individuals.
During the pandemic, when people have to stay at home, sales of online shoping
were increasing. Correct your spelling
shopping
However
, when lockdowns had been over, almost all citizens prefered
go out and doing Add the particle
toprefered
shoping
in Correct your spelling
shopping
traditional
way. Add an article
the traditional
a traditional
This
is explaned
by Correct your spelling
explained
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psychology
psyhology
of persons. Social communication Correct article usage
the psyhology
play
a significant role in humans' everyday life. And Change the verb form
plays
shoping
is not only buying Correct your spelling
shopping
hoping
proccess
, Correct your spelling
process
it is
a variant of interaction between people. Add the word(s)
but it is also
Therefore
, online shopping is done by individuals only in order to save time or because of covid restriction. And, if human beings had enough time, they would prefer to go to real
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a real
store
. Fix the agreement mistake
stores
This
example can help to understant
, that despite the obvious advantages, online Correct your spelling
understand
shoping
cannot totally replace other Correct your spelling
shopping
shopinh
formats.
In conclusion, taking the above-mentioned information into consideration, online shopping cannot encourage Correct your spelling
shopping
closing
of all offline retails. In my opinion, both of them will save their relevance in the future, because they complement each other.Add an article
the closing
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