Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do. -How far do you agree? -What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?

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of people believe that there has been great compensation paid to film actors and company’s managers without considering the sake of the real type of work they do.

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at their academic’s institutions.

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by giving guidelines and showing right from wrong to young students shape their future and develop their potential skills.

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, the compensation paid to them ought to be higher so that they have more incentive and courage. Other criteria’s should be set in order to have unanimous and more justice.

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stars are national pride and the proportion of their generous salaries partly went on what they sacrifice and the trains they have to undergo. Public sectors and

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classes of society. And by giving them extra bonuses for their extra hours they work

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more justice to each individual of society so they feel more disgrace and satisfied and filling the gap between them and celebrities. To conclude,

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being dedicated to health care professionals and

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which provide vital services.