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With the development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the internet in order to meet and chat with friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situations. What solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem?

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In the contemporary epoch, a high number of youngsters are making
use
 of the
internet
 in order to meet and talk with friends through social
media
. Many
problems
 have occurred in terms of
children
such
 as various
kind
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kinds
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 of health
problems
, connected with to express their emotional feelings and
also
 led to
absence
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the absence
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 of
the
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face-to-face interaction.
This
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problems
 can be tackled by taking some measurements.
To begin
 with, in over the world there are many
people
 who are making
use
 of
internet
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the internet
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 in order to solve their
problems
 related to their work or education. So
that is
 the reason why everyone
use
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uses
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 it until late hours which can
led
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lead
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 to different
kind
 of health
problems
such
 spinal curvatures by sitting down a lot in front of the
computers
 and vision
problems
 by looking at the
computers
.
Secondly
, different
kind
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kinds
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 of
people
 completely
prefer
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prefers
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 to meet others
in
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on
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 the
internet
 through social
media
that
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which
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 led to
lack
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a lack
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 of
the
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face-to-face interaction.
In other words
, thank
to
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this
 problem they are really suffering from
to express
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expressing
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 their emotional or other feelings in front
the
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computers
 by talking
unfamiliar
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to unfamiliar
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 individuals. As a consequence,
this
 is causing them to
loss
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 of interaction which is really important to express their feeling.
On the other hand
,
this
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 main
problems
 can be tackled by parents who
use
 the
internet
 a lot. They can
blocking
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 on websites
which
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children
 do not
connected
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connect
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 with it.
Furthermore
, parents can offer their
children
 a surprise in return less making
use
 of
internet
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the internet
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.
As a
result
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,result
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this
 solution can be
more
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a more
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 effective
ways
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way
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 to avoid youngsters looking at
to
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the
computers
 a lot. Another effective solution is for
social
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a social
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media
company
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companies
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 to set up age limits for
children
.
For example
, Facebook recently updated its privacy policy that limits access to kids under the age of ten.
Also
 Whatsapp a major social
media
 app
,
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 recently announced plans to unveil its messaging app for kids. Hopefully,
this
 would help to reduce
a
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 number of young
people
 who are bullied online since only teenagers will
use
 it. To conclude, young
people
use
 the
internet
 to interact with different
kind
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kinds
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 of
people
 online without any guidance and
this
 makes them really free and give self-confident to write others unethical messages. In order
for
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to be out of it, parents should keep an eye
their
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 communications and give necessary advice to their
children
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