Human activities have a negative effect on plant and animal species. Some people say it is too late to do anything, some people think that we should take effective action improve situation. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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There are tremendous controversial perspectives heating a debate whether
people
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’s harmful consequences on fauna and flora are too late to be tackled or else it is necessary for
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to take far-reaching action
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. I would contend that it is optimal to combine both mentioned factors. Without a shadow of
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, there are convincing reasons for the view why
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think that it is too late to handle
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problem which
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in human activities on plants and animals”. One of the daunting issues is deforestation. In
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day and age, as
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have
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demand for lands to live and woods to consume, they clear forest-based land for means of industrial, agriculture and residential
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. It is
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main contributor to habitat destruction and it pushes many kinds of
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on
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the brink of extinction.
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is one of the most endangered
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in China on account of urban sprawl.
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, that many types of
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are becoming extinct caused by human activities is the justification for
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think it is too late to solve
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trouble. While the severe effect on flora and fauna
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to human actions
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widely acknowledged, there are many resolutions to revamp
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problem. It is crucial for authorities to contribute
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to conservation
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in order to
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wildlife habitat security for endangered animals.
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, in Viet Nam,
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Phuong nature reserve was established and supervised by the governors, which is home
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many genres of rare
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like
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gibbon and
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rhino.
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, to improve the dire consequences of human activities on animals and plants,
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should take viable measures as soon as possible. In my opinion, deforestation is a leading reason why
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claim that it is too late to address
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effects on many sorts of
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.
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government should construct national parks to protect endangered
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is a suitable remedy to amend the issue.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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