With a fast food pace of modern life more and more people are turning towards fast food for their main meals . Do you think the advantages overweigh the disadvantages?

It is argued that in recent years tendency

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that numerous

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to consume fast feed as a primary source of a meal.

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look at saving time as

one

of the main merits of

this

and

then

outline

obesity

as

one

of the main drawbacks.

One

of the main principal advantages of eating fast

food

is that people do not waste time on cooking as everyday routine and job schedule where every

second

is valuable , our life became more quickly than ever before. According to the recent

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50% of

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population hang out at work ,

hence

they prefer to order online than cook at home very tired.

Furthermore

, if individuals are very hurrying up and late for their job , whereby the considerable way to resolve the case would be to spend approximately 5-10 minutes

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a snack during a full workday.

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fast cuisine centres near to their job because employees have a quickly available service where they can in a few minutes order online without

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for waiting

waiting

their

food

.

However

,

one

of the major disadvantages of consuming fast

food

is that it leads to

obesity

. Most

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the

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fast foods items

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a huge amount of sugar , fat and chemicals to make them look tasty.

Consequently

, adverse effects of eating junk

food

raise people's weight which leads to having diabetes or

obesity

. A primary example of

this

is Bangladesh which is considered to be the most popular area with a high percentage of

obesity

. In

Bangladesh

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more than 60% of restaurants are using addictive artificial flavours for

food

preparations which could be a primary risk of diseases like cancer, heart attack and diabetes .

Furthermore

, the price of fast

food

is more expensive , so it could enhance our daily cost of living . In conclusion , even people who tend to consume fast

food

they must do not

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forget about the consequences because the drawbacks overweigh their merits .