Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is often said that employees benefit from doing business without changing
company
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, whereas numerous persons believe that different
environment
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can acquire several advantages.We will consider both sides of
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in
this
essay. On the
one
hand, those who support
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similar employer cite they have a large number of opportunities at work.
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range from salary to environment.
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, they have countless chances to promote their positions which can earn more takings.Another argument is that they are familiar with colleagues who labour together with them for a long time.Generally speaking,
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of advantages.Examples can be seen in some conditions
such
as when you have important cases which cannot be missed, they will take your jobs to help you because of long-term friendship.
Furthermore
, proponents highlight that tasks are being accustomed to since they are in the habit of that commissions.
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, they understand the routine of the management and
intimate
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with the building.
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, individuals
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believe that there are
many
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supremacy
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in moving from
one
organization to another.
This
was followed by a large number of samples,
one
of them is in improving
of
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social
skill
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skills
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.
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,
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majority of the cases, they communicate with distinct individuals, after that they gain dissimilar
knowledges
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knowledge
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and be
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their range of relationships.And
then
for many, their
mentals
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meals
are fresh which can bring numerous ideas related
with
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their
carriers
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careers
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.Examples can be seen in the progress of doing
project
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projects
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which
need
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different sights to be a perfect situation.
Finally
, proponents of
this
view claim that they have several experiences than orthodox who loved to
be stay
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in only
one
company during their whole life.In the view of the fact that they teach various working suggestions
such
as how to solve problems. Overall, it is sensible to conclude that old and new employer depends on human beings' personality, mentality, habits of doing jobs and social skill, and both sides have advantages and disadvantage.In spite of
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I prefer working in different organizations according to
above
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the above
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reasons.
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  • Corporate ladder
  • Adaptability
  • Comfort zone
  • Professional network
  • Diverse skill set
  • Industry exposure
  • Innovation
  • Resilience
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