You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter in order to inquire some information about two items that I am interested in buying, which are the hand-mixer from the brand KitchenHelp and the smartwatch

second

edition from Export Experts. Let me start by kindly asking you to check the availability of these products at your

store

in Laval. If any of these products are unavailable at your

store

, would be possible to order them in the

couple of weeks? In

this

way, I will be able to get all the goods from the same place. As for the prices, I have seen that the

store

is holding a 15% off in any purchase over $100, until the end of the month.

Thus

, I would like to know the total price of my acquisition, considering

this

discount or any other one that I am unaware of.

Finally

, I would appreciate it if you could provide me with the period in which the

store

would hold these items for me. I am looking forward to hearing from you regarding these issues. Yours faithfully, Christina Smith

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