You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • say what the participants liked about the hotel • explain why they were unhappy about the food • suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
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the wonderful service that you have provided us during our stay Change preposition
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meeting.
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, we would like to thank you for accomodating us and giving us the best experience having to stay in your place. for transparency, Use synonyms
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stating the good things that are Linking Words
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your strengths and assets. My fellow workers loved the way you treated us like we were Replace the word
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guests of your hotel. From the Correct your spelling
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we arrived, your staff welcomed us at the entrance and served as ushers guiding us to the venue of our Use synonyms
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meeting so that we won't have to waste Use synonyms
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wandering around since you have a very big facility.
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interior of your function hall which we occupied was very classy but very comfortable Correct your spelling
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. The seat and table arrangements were very conducive for team planning and discussions. The temperature inside the hall was well balanced. It was not too hot nor too cold, just enough to keep us cool and comfortable but at the same Use synonyms
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would make the participants want to sleep during Correct pronoun usage
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feedback letter contains not only positive reactions but as well as negative ones.. please don't take Linking Words
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take it as Correct your spelling
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constructive criticism. Most of my officemates,Including myself, were a bit disappointed about the food.The plated serving was not enough to satisfy our rumbling stomachs considering that some of us were Remove the article
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presentors
and the food was one of the best things we look forward to after a long tiring discussion.
If you would not mind, I would like to suggest , to give your guests the Correct your spelling
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experience and get the best out of their stay, we encourage you to consider Correct your spelling
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buffet style
meals like what other hotels offer. Add a hyphen
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Overall
Over all
, we never regret choosing your place for our assembly. looking forward to more Correct your spelling
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affairs with you.
Sincerely yours,
Francisco G. Feria Jr.Use synonyms
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.