Traffic congestion is a serious problem in most big cities. Some people believe that governments should build more roads. What do you think about this solution?

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well known, nowadays

cities

are experimenting

population

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growth which leads to different issues

such

as overpopulation and

traffic

congestion

. To solve the problem of transport

congestion

, many

people

claim that governments should build more

roads

. Behind

this

argument, I consider that there are

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alternatives to solve

this

issue, but

first

I will take a look at both sides of the question until to reach a conclusion. To start, I will not deny that building more

roads

could be a good solution to

this

matter. Due to a great transport

system

and design, governments will correct the vehicles

congestion

in the

cities

,

owing

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that, there no will be more

traffic

jams and

people

’s discontentment will decrease respect to

this

problem.

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,

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traffic

system

will improve the accessibility between

cities

and connection between

people

. Thanks to that, other small and medium

cities

could experiment

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growth which will drive to

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the economical

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improvement of the area.

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the other hand, the construction and improvement of

traffic

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system

also

has

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some drawbacks.

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, there exist

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an impact

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impact

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on

social

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and natural environment.

In other words

, the construction of

roads

need

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the acquisition of lands which will drive to

relocation

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the relocation

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of residents and

destruction

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of the environment. So,

people

will have to reconstruct their lives in other areas which will affect their economical and social situation. What is more, landscape destruction can not be omitted. Some animal and vegetal species will disappear because of

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of their habitat. In conclusion, from my point of view, a great

traffic

system

will connect

people

and

cities

, but

also

will affect some families and push them to change their lives. Governments should consider

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both sides and apart from

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the erection

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of

roads

, improve public transportation and encourage

people

to use it,

thus

will decrease

traffic

congestion

and pollution in the

cities

.