Traffic congestion is a major problem in most large cities ,nowadays. What are the causes of traffic congestion in cities? What could the government do to reduce this problem?

Recently, many cities developments face serious issues about
traffic
congestion. The study shows that the main causes of
traffic
congestion are the large number of private
cars
ownerships occupying the
roads
.
This
essay will explain the reasons behind
traffic
congestions
and the possible solutions that can be implemented.
To begin
with, the main reason for
traffic
congestion is many people easily own
the
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cars
.
Firstly
, Car prices are getting cheaper years by
years
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year
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that
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lead
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leading
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to
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many citizens can buy
it
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them
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effortlessly.
Secondly
, even
cars
taxes
are
considerabely
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considerably
low.
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, To buy
a simple city
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a simple city car
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cars
,
it
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only cost
at
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arround
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around
one
hundreds
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hundred
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millions rupiah
include
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including
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taxes
. It causes every single household can afford it and use it as their daily commuting
modas
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modes
.
On the other hand
, The government budget
on
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for
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roads
developments is limited.
As a result
, Many
cars
will occupy road spaces and cause
traffic
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a traffic
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jam
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jams
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.
However
, there are solutions for preventing road
congestions
happen that can be
impelemented
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implemented
by Government.
Firstly
, Government should limit the convenience of buying and owning
the
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cars
by increasing
cars
prices and
taxes
Secondly
, the minimum requirement of driving
license
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licenses
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should
be tighten
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be tightened
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.
For example
, Japan Governments increase the
cars
taxes
until
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to
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ten-tenth of
cars
prices. They
also
prohibit
cars
for
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from
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accessing main arterial
roads
.
As a result
,
the
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traffic
congestions
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congestion
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is
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are
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rarely seen because the
roads
are free from
cars
. In
conclusions
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conclusion
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,
Traffic
congestions
can happen if many citizens drive their
cars
as daily commutes. To solve the problems, The Governments should reduce the convenience of buying and owning
the
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cars
, so that the citizens will
thinks
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think
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twice before
purchase
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purchasing
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it
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them
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.
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