Traffic congestion is a major problem in most large cities ,nowadays. What are the causes of traffic congestion in cities? What could the government do to reduce this problem?
Recently, many cities developments face serious issues about
traffic
congestion. The study shows that the main causes of traffic
congestion are the large number of private cars
ownerships occupying the roads
. This
essay will explain the reasons behind traffic
congestions
and the possible solutions that can be implemented.
To begin
with, the main reason for traffic
congestion is many people easily own the
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apply
cars
. Firstly
, Car prices are getting cheaper years by years
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year
that
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apply
lead
Wrong verb form
leading
to
many citizens can buy Change preposition
apply
it
effortlessly. Correct pronoun usage
them
Secondly
, even cars
taxes
are considerabely
low. Correct your spelling
considerably
For example
, To buy a simple city
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a simple city car
simple city cars
cars
, it
only cost Correct pronoun usage
apply
at
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apply
arround
one Correct your spelling
around
hundreds
millions rupiah Change to singular
hundred
include
Wrong verb form
including
taxes
. It causes every single household can afford it and use it as their daily commuting modas
. Correct your spelling
modes
On the other hand
, The government budget on
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for
roads
developments is limited. As a result
, Many cars
will occupy road spaces and cause traffic
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a traffic
jam
.
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jams
However
, there are solutions for preventing road congestions
happen that can be impelemented
by Government. Correct your spelling
implemented
Firstly
, Government should limit the convenience of buying and owning the
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apply
cars
by increasing cars
prices and taxes
Secondly
, the minimum requirement of driving license
should Fix the agreement mistake
licenses
be tighten
. Change the verb form
be tightened
For example
, Japan Governments increase the cars
taxes
until
ten-tenth of Change preposition
to
cars
prices. They also
prohibit cars
for
accessing main arterial Change preposition
from
roads
. As a result
, the
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apply
traffic
congestions
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congestion
is
rarely seen because the Change the verb form
are
roads
are free from cars
.
In conclusions
, Fix the agreement mistake
conclusion
Traffic
congestions
can happen if many citizens drive their cars
as daily commutes. To solve the problems, The Governments should reduce the convenience of buying and owning the
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apply
cars
, so that the citizens will thinks
twice before Change the verb form
think
purchase
Wrong verb form
purchasing
it
.Correct pronoun usage
them
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