The bar charts below show the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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nations for the

production

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and

consumption

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of electric power in 2014. The countries include China, the United States,

Russia

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,

Japan

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,

India

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, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany and

Korea

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production

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and

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billion

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kWh

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.

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, China had the highest

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on

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both

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and

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of

electricity

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percentage.

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,

Korea

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had the lowest

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on

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both

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production

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and

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of

electricity

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percentage.

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, China had 5,398

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kWh

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in the

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of

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while

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5322

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kWh

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in the

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of

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United States had the

second

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on both of it that was 4,099

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kWh

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in

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of

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while

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3866

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kWh

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in

consumption

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of

electricity

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. On the

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of

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rank,

Russia

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,

Japan

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,

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India

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occupied positions three, four and five in the top

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, which the

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corresponding that

Russia

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1057

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,

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936.2billion

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936.2 billion

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and

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871

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kWh

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. The final five places in the top

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Canada had 618.9, France had 561.2, Brazil had 530.7, Germany had 526.6 and

Korea

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had the lowest

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was 485.1.

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, on the

consumption

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of

electricity

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rate

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,

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,

Japan

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India

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occupied the same positions that

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three, four and five in the top

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, which

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1038, 856.7,

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and 698.8

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.

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, Germany had 582.5

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kWh

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which was higher than Canada had 499.9

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kWh

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. The final three place in the rank was France(462.9), Brazil(455.8) and

Korea

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(449.5)