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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that , in today's world , subjects like science and technology arer more important than history.

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It is always argued that some
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's like science and technology is much more important than some other
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's like history that they are not that
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useful in today's world. In fact, in my point of
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 both of the subjects can be really important in student's education process.
To begin
 with, people always pay more attention to the studies
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wich
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they
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are related to
modern
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 world and help our new generations to upgrade and improve their knowledge about technology and important science's like genetics.
In addition
, it can be really effective on students future job in today's life to know about some technology application's and
softwares
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software
software's
 and know how to work with them.
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For example
 if you learn simple
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's about working with computer's at school you will get a better job or
possition
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 in your future career.
On the other hand
,
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's like history can teach students many thing's. As the
first
 point, at school,
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studying
 about our background and
history
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 like king's and queen's in the past or other famous personalities
who
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they
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are successful or overthrown can teach
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many
 useful
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's to utilize in our personal life. While it is
neccessery
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necessary
 for our children to know their culture's and traditions which they are complete their personality in younger age's. In conclusion, all the subject's that are
tought
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taught
tough
thought
 in school's can play an important role in children's future. Each of them can
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 part of their need's and
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stage's
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