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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

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Dear Sir/Madam, I gave
surprised
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to
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 my brother who passed the NCLEX board exam today February 21, 2022. We went to your
restaurant
 at Crown Grill around seven o`clock in the evening, we are six pax. We
weared
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wore
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 simple
cloths
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clothes
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 and we are dark skin because we are native eta`s. While we are entering
in
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the
restaurant
, the receptionist talk to us in
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bad way that
it`s look
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 like we cannot pay our bills because
this
restaurant
 is for very important people (VIP) and all the food is expensive. I told to the receptionist that we can afford to pay our bills, and he bring us
in
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 the side corner
in
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 the
restaurant
. I want the receptionist to apologise to my family
especially
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 to my mom and dad
of
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 what we did. Could you please teach all your staff how to treat
costumer
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customer
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 right, fair and equal? Thank you and I hope for your urgent action. Yours Faithfully, Gace Andres
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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