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Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford What are the reasons for this behaviour ? What action can be taken to prevent from having this problem ?

#people #debt #behaviour #action
In
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this
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these
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 days ,
People
 can
purchasing
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purchase
be purchasing
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 anything without any planning without thinking about future
problems
 . In many. Countries
people
 are buying
cars
, Houses or many facilities products buying but that things don'
t
 need and can not afford . I completely agree with
this
type
 of
awarnness
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awareness
create
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that create
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problems
 in life Let's discuss
about
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apply
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this
problem
 ,
cause
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its cause
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 , effects and solutions below paragraphs. Nowadays , Many
people
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people's
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 lifestyle changes because of their
friends
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friend's
friends'
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 and
relatives
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relatives'
relative's
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 lifestyles.
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The
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They
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The
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people
 buying vehicles
for
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to
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 showup yo society .
Firstly
 humans are purchasing
cars
 they don'
t
 requirement of
this
 they can'
t
asstiment
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assignment
 of the budget and they will create
problem
 in future .
people
 can'
t
 pay
emi
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EMI
 for their own vehicles .
Hence
 , financial banks give
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a penalty
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penalty
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penalties
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 to
car
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the car
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owner
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owners
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.
In
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this
type
 causes banking authority
declared
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to declare
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deflolder
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folder
 for
this
type
 of
people
 .
people
 pay
big
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a big
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 amount of penalty
for
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 recover for their
cars
 .
Hence
 , if a
people
 can buy
car
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a car
the car
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 for their requirement.
Secondly
 ,
this
type
 of
problem
solution
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solving
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 is
banking
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the banking
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 sector increasing
interest
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the interest
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 rate of
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the loan
a loan
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loan
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loans
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.
Then
people
 cannot
eassily
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easily
 buy
cars
, and they think about
this
type
problems
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of problems
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 loan facilities and
finicial
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financial
 sectors are
attrected
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attracted
 peoples buys but
this
 is not
good
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a good
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 buy for unrequriment product and etc .
Loan
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The loan
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process
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processes
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are
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is
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 harder for
peoples
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people
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this
 os good
type
 of solution.
Hence
 , if a banking sector passed out
circluer
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circular
 . For higher interest rate
then
people
 can
discaraged
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discouraged
 to buy vehicles and they slove for future
problems
 . In conclusion , some
people
 get
debt
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into debt
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 buying things they don'
t
 need and can'
t
 afford
this
 is
big
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a big
the big
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problem
of
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in
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 our society .
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