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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

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Getting
jobs
 in any sector has become the ultimate goal of youngsters to attain better living standards and be self-dependent in which they consider different
factors
 of
job
 satisfaction.
This
 essay will
further
 elaborate
these
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factors
 which are not always idealistic. The
first
 point which affects the most to
an employees
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employees
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 is salary packages due to many reasons like to save for future, to
fulfill
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 basic requirements of their families and many more.
Besides
this
,
working
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 environment
also
attain
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attention
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 of workers to concentrate more on
work
 with full potential. It is
,
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 because adults need an atmosphere
which
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 is safe and healthy to encourage them for doing a great
job
. To explain
this
 point there are many examples of
private
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 sector in which wage rates are less but
still
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 people
enjoys
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 their
work
 due to friendly and comfortable environment, providing bt their colleagues and higher authorities which sometimes not available in
public
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 sector.
Thus
, employees give their 100%
in
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 the betterment of the department and feel absolutely satisfied. With regards to the
last
 part of the question, no doubt
job
 satisfaction is prominent,
however
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 it is
also
 unrealistic that everyone is satisfied with his employment because of the involvement of hard
work
 and risk
factors
.
For instance
, army officers
work
 hard to protect their countries just because of high salaries and for
job
 security whether they are happy or not. It is inevitable that some workers compromise their desires and
sacrifices
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 their
comfort-zones
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 to get those
risk taking
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jobs
which
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that
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 pays well. To sum the
above mentioned
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 statement, it
conclude
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 that, it is not easy to get desirable and well-paid
jobs
 by which individuals feel satisfied from their
jobs
,
although
another
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factors
 make them feel better at their
job
 places.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job satisfaction
  • wellbeing
  • contribute
  • meaningful work
  • work-life balance
  • career progression
  • workplace environment
  • recognition
  • constructive feedback
  • compensation
  • benefits
  • job security
  • autonomy
  • skills match
  • interests match
  • variety
  • challenge
  • economic conditions
  • labor market
  • individual expectations
  • job role
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