As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

Getting
jobs
in any sector has become the ultimate goal of youngsters to attain better living standards and be self-dependent in which they consider different
factors
of
job
satisfaction.
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essay will
further
elaborate
these
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factors
which are not always idealistic. The
first
point which affects the most to
an employees
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is salary packages due to many reasons like to save for future, to
fulfill
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basic requirements of their families and many more.
Besides
this
,
working
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environment
also
attain
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attention
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the attention
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of workers to concentrate more on
work
with full potential. It is
,
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because adults need an atmosphere
which
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is safe and healthy to encourage them for doing a great
job
. To explain
this
point there are many examples of
private
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sector in which wage rates are less but
still
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people
enjoys
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their
work
due to friendly and comfortable environment, providing bt their colleagues and higher authorities which sometimes not available in
public
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sector.
Thus
, employees give their 100%
in
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the betterment of the department and feel absolutely satisfied. With regards to the
last
part of the question, no doubt
job
satisfaction is prominent,
however
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it is
also
unrealistic that everyone is satisfied with his employment because of the involvement of hard
work
and risk
factors
.
For instance
, army officers
work
hard to protect their countries just because of high salaries and for
job
security whether they are happy or not. It is inevitable that some workers compromise their desires and
sacrifices
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their
comfort-zones
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to get those
risk taking
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jobs
which
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pays well. To sum the
above mentioned
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statement, it
conclude
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that, it is not easy to get desirable and well-paid
jobs
by which individuals feel satisfied from their
jobs
,
although
another
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factors
make them feel better at their
job
places.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job satisfaction
  • wellbeing
  • contribute
  • meaningful work
  • work-life balance
  • career progression
  • workplace environment
  • recognition
  • constructive feedback
  • compensation
  • benefits
  • job security
  • autonomy
  • skills match
  • interests match
  • variety
  • challenge
  • economic conditions
  • labor market
  • individual expectations
  • job role
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