There is a
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controversy heating up a debate whether more peacefulness would have existed around the
world
if it had been managed by
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. In my point of view,
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would consider myself as an advocate of
this
statement.
Without a shadow of a doubt, there were a bunch of arguments and
violence
resulting from male leaders. In my opinion, the main drive to
this
dire problem
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leading methods because men usually have a tendency to rigidly decide and use
violence
and conflicts to deal with problems.
For example
, a German dictator - Adolf Hitler usually gave abundant rampant decisions which were the main contribution to
World
War II
although
his target was to expand Germany’s territory for citizens.
Therefore
, I think that
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tactics of
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are the main drive to arguments and
violence
.
On the other hand
, it is believed that if
women
get the leading role, the
world
will become more peaceful. Because the approach
women
lead the
world
is
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power of collaboration because
women
are inclined to cope with matters by persuasion, negotiation without
violence
.
For instance
, Angela Merkel-Former Prime Minister of Germany put effort to reconcile conflicts for Ukraine-Russia.
Hence
, the presences of female in political empowerment are indispensable for
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world
without
violence
and conflicts.
In conclusion,
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leading methods of
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are the key to
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peaceful
world
.
Thus
, the presence of
women
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tremendously necessary.