In the past, many male leaders have led our society to conflicts and violence. The world would be better governed and more peaceful if it was ruled by women. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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controversy heating up a debate whether more peacefulness would have existed around the

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. In my point of view,

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statement. Without a shadow of a doubt, there were a bunch of arguments and

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resulting from male leaders. In my opinion, the main drive to

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leading methods because men usually have a tendency to rigidly decide and use

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and conflicts to deal with problems.

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, a German dictator - Adolf Hitler usually gave abundant rampant decisions which were the main contribution to

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War II

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his target was to expand Germany’s territory for citizens.

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are the main drive to arguments and

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get the leading role, the

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will become more peaceful. Because the approach

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power of collaboration because

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are inclined to cope with matters by persuasion, negotiation without

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.

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, Angela Merkel-Former Prime Minister of Germany put effort to reconcile conflicts for Ukraine-Russia.

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, the presences of female in political empowerment are indispensable for

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and conflicts. In conclusion,

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are the key to

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tremendously necessary.