You and your friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were extremely dissatisfied with the experience. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: • Explain the reason for the celebration • Give details of your visit to the restaurant • Say what you would like the restaurant to do

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Dear sir, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I am extremely disappointed with your restaurant service where I did
special
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a special
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party for my friend.
Last
week we were visited
to
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apply
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your restaurant for my best
friend
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friend's
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birthday celebration .
However
, the service was very bad. We ordered the vegetarian pizza but we
had
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tohad
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sever
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severe
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non- veg
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non-veg
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pizza .
secondly
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,secondly
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We tried to make that day special for my friend but your staff was not
coprative
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cooperative
. I had reserved the table
advance
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in advance
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for
this
occasion.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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