CATERING STAFF WANTED Are you free weekends from 20th June to 5th September? We need staff to serve food at events including family celebrations & business dinners. Previous experience desirable but not essential. Apply at: [email protected] Write an email applying for the job (170-200 words).

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20th June to 5th September. I’m interested in applying for the position of catering staff. I am 17 years old and I am in school now, but I am graduating soon. I have level B1 in English and level A2 in ICT. When I graduate, I will apply to Harvard. I have good communication with people and I can work with them in a team. I worked part-time at a grocery store on weekends. I

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volunteered to help at a veterinary clinic. These jobs helped me develop my communication skills with clients, to work in a team, to be kind to people and animals and to help as much as I can. I consider myself to be hardworking, good with people, responsible and smart. I am

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fluent in English and Bulgarian. |I would appreciate a reply. My thanks for giving

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your attention. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you have any questions. Yours faithfully, Victoria Sofronieva

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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CATERING STAFF WANTED Are you free weekends from 20th June to 5th September? We need staff to serve food at events including family celebrations & business dinners. Previous experience desirable but not essential. Apply at: [email protected] Write an email applying for the job (170-200 words).

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