The bar charts below show the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar charts below show the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart compares the
production
and the
consumption
of
energy
for ten
countries
from Europe (3), America (3) and Asia (4)
during
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in
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2014. The
countries
are prioritized from the greatest producer of
energy
(China) to the lowest producer (Korea).
Overall
, most of the
countries
analyzed show a greater
production
of
kWh
than
consumption
of
energy
.
However
, Germany shows a bigger
consumption
the
energy
than produced in the same period.
On the other hand
, China was the country not only with the biggest
production
(5.398
billon
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billion
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of
kWh
) but
also
the greatest
consumption
(5.322 billion
of
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kWh
).
While
the Republic of Korea shows the lowest
consumption
and
production
(449.5 billion
of
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kWh
and 485.1 billion
of
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kWh
respectively). From
other point
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of view, the ranking of
countries
by continent reflects that Asia and America produced and consumed the biggest amount of
energy
in 2014 mainly supported by China and The United States
that
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were
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where
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the
Countries
that
the
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spend
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of
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energy
during the year was approximately 5 and 4 times bigger than the other
countries
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • electricity production
  • electricity consumption
  • megawatt-hours (MWh)
  • top ten countries
  • comparison
  • leading producers/consumers
  • highest producers
  • similarities
  • differences
  • relationship
  • significant gap
  • global scenario
  • balance
  • imbalance
  • overview
  • highlighting
  • identify
  • discuss
  • mention
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