Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The importance of school
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is likely one of the most discussed topics in the society, so, for some people studying or teaching
History
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is more valuable than other
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. And another group of society believes that
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and
Technology
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have more value for nowadays. Taking into account that
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of
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history
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gives a lot about
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, I still tend to
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new doors of
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by learning
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and
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history
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has a big influence
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building
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society where people know where they are "from".
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gives a wide view about
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by not doing
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mistakes that were done in the past. But at school
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studying
history
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often
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a very boring process, most
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pupils
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don't interested in
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ssubject
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subject
. Perhaps in real
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type of knowledge about
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is not necessary, so that's why most
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students
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forgot the information they studied at school. On another hand, the
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Science
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and
Technology
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have more different areas that will be more interesting for students. At these
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subjects
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pupils face
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a lot of practical workshops which helps them to get deeper knowledge in that area, so students may not forget it easily. In real
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these
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could help people more than
history
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, so they have the chance to do openings in different spheres of
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or create new
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. In conclusion, there
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objectively
argumented
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arguments
opinions about what subject is more important for each of us.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial
  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
  • sharpen
  • evaluate
  • significance
  • heritage
  • legacy
  • advent
  • breakthroughs
  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
  • cooperation
  • diversity
  • fulfilling
  • promote
  • facilitate
  • prosperity
  • enhance
  • foster
  • foundation
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