You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have recently visited a city on vacation and stayed in a hotel. Write a letter to the manager about your stay. In your letter: Give details of your stay What were the high & low points of the hotel What are your suggestions; recommendations and / or complaints about the hotel Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

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Dear Sir, I am writing
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which i and my family stayed there during our summer vacation. I would like to share some points which are related to service.
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with, your location of the
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is extremely wonderful, the room
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got is very nice. It was very close to the beach,
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could see the view of the sea through the window.
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, the room service was excellent but sometimes. By the way, they bring the food very quickly.
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, the swimming pool and the bar are the low points. In my view, the lifeguards should appoint for full time, sometimes he was not available at the pool to protect the guest,
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sometimes towels were not there after the swim.
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, in the bar, the wines and whisky range is very less. I did not have my favourite drink in the
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. To conclude, the inn is better
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to others in your city. Please do follow up on guests' feedback and correct it when
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time they visit your
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. I wish you good luck to you and your team in the future. Yours Sincerely, Mohammed Idris.
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