The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
The two pictures, illustrate something regarding the process of the life cycle of the
silkworm
and the production of silk
cloth.
It proves to be quite apparent that the process of the life cycle is divided into several developing stages. In the first step, on a leaf, a moth produces eggs which will become the silkworm
in the next
10 days and they will be fed by the Mulberry leaf as well as
in the following step, silkworm
larva will become larva which will be almost covered by Correct article usage
the silkworm
silk
thread from 4 to 6 weeks before a larva becomes a cocoon
after 3-8 days, after which, a cocoon
will be changed into a moth within 16 days.
As can be seen from the illustration, the procedure of production of silk
cloth consists of a few parts as follows. To begin
with, a cocoon
which will be boiled in the water in the next
part will be selected first and the cocoon
will be unwinded to a thread which will be between 300 and 900 meters before a
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the
cocoon
which
will be twisted and dyed in a container, aside from which, a Correct pronoun usage
apply
cocoon
will be weaved and then
dyed again.
In conclusion, this
is the whole stage of the life cycle of the silkworm
and the production of silk
cloth.Submitted by whuan0719 on
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