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the proportion of three various regions household recycling rates between 2005 and 2015.

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The given line graph illustrates the proportion of household recycling rates in three various regions between 2005 and 2015. Overall,there was an increase in the number of household recycling in the UK and Germany, while that of France experienced a downward trend. Starting in 2005,the number of the UK household recycling rose steeply;
however
, following 2007 the recycling number flattened off at 40 per
cent
. From that point onwards,
This
 amount increased dramatically,reaching its peak at just over 60 per
cent
 in 2015.
Similarly
,Germany indicated a strong increase in recycling numbers from 2005 until 2015, reaching a peak of just under 60 per
cent
 at the end of the period.
On the other hand
, in France, there was a significant decrease until 2013 but a sharp increase to around almost 40 per
cent
 in 2015.
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