As transport and accommodation problems are increasing in many cities, some governments encourage businesses to move to rural areas. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays the problems of transport and accommodation are rising dramatically in most cities all around the world. The governments are encouraging individuals to settle in rural areas. From my point of view ,I personally believe
this
trend could have multiple downsides rather than upsides.
Firstly
,one of the main drawbacks is the lack of facilities in villages. For example
,we all know in most countries all around the world ,megacities, as well as
big industrial areas, are the most common places to live in. As a result
of providing all facilities such
as parks ,educational centres ,chain stores as well as
libraries ,the population habitually prefer to settle in cities. There is no denying that to move into rural regions there is not any chance to access these amenities. This
could create many problems for citizens . Additionally
,the children may piss off staying at home. All things considered ,this
makes it clear why moving into rural areas is not a suitable way to reduce the troubles that the governments face.
Secondly
,apart from the disadvantages ,there are some benefits that should be considered. For instance
, these days the population is increasing considerably and human beings are facing many troubles in these regions. A noticeable problem is living in highrise flats and apartment blocks. Moreover
,from time to time ,personal cars should be used because of crowded transport vehicles and there is no denying that this
could cause traffic congestions
Fix the agreement mistake
congestion
as well as
high_pollution
levels. It is obvious that to live in villages humans won't face these tough situations. Having a relaxed lifestyle can be achieved effortlessly in these regions. Correct your spelling
high pollution
Therefore
,it becomes apparent there are numerous advantages behind each disadvantage that must be reflected on
.
To summarise ,Change preposition
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this
trend could have more harmful effects than positive. It is predicted that to continue encouraging citizens to abandon cities these places won't be capable to hold
individuals in the near future.Change preposition
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Provide a more balanced view by considering both advantages and disadvantages in a more equal way.
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