Last week, you celebrated your birthday with some friends in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed yourselves very much. Write a letter to the restaurant. In your letter mention the food and service explain that you really enjoyed the atmosphere suggest any improvements to make things better
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing
this
letter to thank you for the service you offered to me and my fellow friends last
week. You made my birthday such
a memorable one, your food ad service was so excellent.Firstly
we had our starter, it was so presentable, by taking a look at it we have no delicious doubt. After having our starter meal we were saved our main dish which was colorful
and the food was Change the spelling
colourful
also
excellent . We were offered the first
class service. The waiters were very sufficient it was not taking them too long to serve us.We had a great time birthday celebration at your restaurant the environment was amazing
furthermore
the background music was so sweet and enjoyable we actually had a while of time. But Due to climatic changes every time, I was wondering if you could upgrade your air conditioning system that would be great because later on that day the weather became too hot Add a comma
,furthermore
therefore
we started sweating which is not a good thing.
Yours faithfully
Praise Danai KufakwedekeSubmitted by tfungwe on
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.